There were roughly 25 errors of syntax and incorrect wording usage. It was also rather ponderous, and it could have been shortened by a paragraph without losing any of the content. There are several instances of using 2 words when one is more advisable.
You showed a sufficient knowledge of language, though too formal in many spots. For a first attempt-if this is so- it was not bad. The best reporting on this site is by David Greisman-at least in my opinion- who keeps it taut, to the point and whose language is good, quite the opposite to his laborious, alliterative and dreary "Fighting Words". It wouldn't be a bad example to read his reports a few times, and compare them with yours.
yea it actually was my first time writing anything boxing wise that wasn't just a 2 sentence opinion! Thank you for the constructive criticism and after rereading it 100x over again I see exactly what you're saying! Always room for improvement! Thank you guys again!
HW -Fury (like the town idiot knocking guys out, hilarious and awesome, could do w/o his singing tho!)
CW - Afolabi (always brings it! Funny personality!)
LHW - Stevenson (not going to lie, he won me over with that one punch! Hope to see more!)
SMW - Froch (Always in a good fight, plus love to see his partner ringside! No complaints! ;) )
MW - Golovkin (He's a beast!!!)
LM - Cotto ( has a warrior's heart, even though his body is no where keeping up!)
WW - Pacquiao (Always entertaining! Even w recent slipping)
JWW - Matthysse/Rios (both crazy scary hard hitting warriors!)
LW - Figguerero (His youtube highlights are all quick=one round ko's!)
SF - Uchiyama (Ko artist)
F - Mares (self explainatory)
SB - Donaire (Never in a boring fight in recent memory)
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Her name is crystina poncher. she's unbelievably beautiful. Not sexy or hot, just really pretty/beautiful! :heart:
I see Quil going in with a heavy heart and ending it early since the recent news of his wife's miscarrage, ala guerrero w' his wifes breast cancer, wlad w'n his dads death...etc
He's acting more and more of a douche since he got signed with Goldenboy. Before he was praising HBO and now bashing them on twitter and tweeting it to Espinoza like "did I do good boss? did I do good?" :slap:
:qqq: This....put it all in a nutshell. Anyone who doesnt see this DID NOT look at the vid!
It was a LIVE! interview on ESPN for Sportscenter during their primetime spot, that Top Rank organized. Rios had no choice but to do the interview right before and during his alloted training time and Top Rank has said they informed the Pacquaio camp of this time overlap. Now for Roach to be unaware of the situation and new time slots, well that's bad on him, but you don't go over to another trainer and tell him hen needs to get out. I feel Roach was just trying to throw his weight around and attempt to "bully" Garcia out of the gym. All in all, should have been handled a different way and no excuses for the physical altercation, but the blame for the whole situation falls on the provoker/instigator which is sadly Roach in this situation.
the mexican guy in the tan shirt in the corner looks like a trainer from RGBA. you can see him in the ESNEWS vids. maybe they sent a couple of russians they got over there? don't look to good