My poem for creative writing class.

[tyson]

I like your poem.

I can write poem too;

Are you interested in getting laid?
But there's one catch; you won't get paid
But I can treat you like a hooker if you want me to
I don't care, cause f.ucking is all I want to do

If you wonder, I'm 17
Not my age, you know what I mean!
But is that really enough for you?
Cause I really hope you want to f.uck me too!

You have 5 minutes to answer me...
So, girl, what is it gonna be?

[tyson]

Me can do loving too;

The lights are out, but do not fear
My thoughts are with you, my love is near
Just show the darkness your beautiful smile
And all evil will leave this Earth for awhile

I give you a goodnight-kiss on top of your head
And checks for monsters under your bed
See? There is no creep!
Now, my sweet girl, you can fall asleep...

[THE REED]

that was awesome.

[!! Shawn]

I like your poem.

I can write poem too;

Are you interested in getting laid?
But there's one catch; you won't get paid
But I can treat you like a hooker if you want me to
I don't care, cause f.ucking is all I want to do

If you wonder, I'm 17
Not my age, you know what I mean!
But is that really enough for you?
Cause I really hope you want to f.uck me too!

You have 5 minutes to answer me...
So, girl, what is it gonna be?

Careful Tyson, youre turning me on.

[tyson]

Careful Tyson, youre turning me on.

Is that a good thing or a bad thing?

[Lawrentz82]

That was incredible man...I was caught from the opening. I love writing that brings emotion out of the reader...I'm a newbie at writing myself. Please feel free to comment whether you like it or not...just be constructive. Thats all I ask.

When the Jekyll is I
I just revel in my
Best mind, but I’ll let
It rest when it’s time

And give life to Hyde
Like Frankenstein’s Bride
If your why he's alive
I’d advise that you hide