Watch me spar...need some criticism

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I don't know which one you are, but if you are the guy in the red, only weave when needed, and when you get inside on a weave, throw a nice uppercut there. Leading very well with the jab in the earlier part of the round, and overall I would say very nice, on both parts.

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WOW, if you are the guy in the black, you landed an insane left on his cheek when he came in close. If you are the guy in the red; WOW, you took an insane left on your cheek when you went in close.

[Golden-Gloves]

WOW, if you are the guy in the black, you landed an insane left on his cheek when he came in close. If you are the guy in the red; WOW, you took an insane left on your cheek when you went in close.

HAHAHAHAHA

[chitownamateur]

WOW, if you are the guy in the black, you landed an insane left on his cheek when he came in close. If you are the guy in the red; WOW, you took an insane left on your cheek when you went in close.

lmao!! im the guy in the black

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lmao!! im the guy in the black

Damn, then you fight well indeed my friend, that left was sick, got me amped.

[chitownamateur]

Which one are you again? I'd say the guy in black should be the more experienced. Throws his punches better, moves less awkwardly, and more efficiently.

If that's you, try to keep your chin down, and turn your right hand inwards a little, when it's in your guard. It kinda dangles too much as it is, and won't do much for protection that way.
Also, you're letting him out, to your right, which is really where you'd want him to go. Cut him off that way, and throw a right hook, he'll eat it every time with his chin in the air like that.
Overall, a good style. Needs refinement, and maybe some more attitude. You seem a little timid in there, which is holding you back a little.

definitely more attitude, more angles,, my chin down is also a problem ill fix....also need to start throwin that right more like u said

[PunchDrunk]

Try thinking "fast" when you're throwing punches. You look like you're a little tense when throwing, and being a little lighter and thinking about being fast instead of throwing hard can really make a difference.

[chitownamateur]

well i got robbed in my semi bout in the golden gloves....got too tense during the fight...rocked him badly twice with body shots....crowd booed even though i didnt know them....good learning experience though....only reason i say got robbed is because an honest guy from the gym said u won but didnt fight too well...didnt mantain my distance

[chitownamateur]

ill have a video of me sparrin with jose hernandez aka the guy who knocked litzau out and is now facing rocky juarez in the de la hoya undercard in the future