"We're gonna take him into deep water...then drown him".
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Is it universal, culutral, moral?
I'll bet it ends up maturation. All amatuer writers end up with maturation.
More free advice for plot rendering.
Chaperts 1-4 --- Chase the protagonist up a tree.
Chapters 5-10 --- Throw rocks at the protagonist.
Chapters 11-15 --- Get the protagonist down from the tree.
Simple as Simon says.
Extra free advice.
Remember verbs are a writer's friend. Always look for exciting, descriptive, and most importantly, seldom used (new to the reader) action verbs.
Considering your dilemma fucking, buggering, and sodomizing are right out.
Um! Let us see? What new action verbs would best describe a pennis penetrating a male arse?
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Ha! in this generation? better make sure the novel is shorter than the accompanying Cliff Notes. Here is a great idea for a character! Buster Shanus came from the coast of Scotland... the family settling in the hardscrabble streets of New York, noticed the Italians often dropped part of their last names... and so likewise did the Shanus clan go to the courts and remove the "S-H" from the family name...Comment
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"That's when you give him the ole one-three:"
"One-three, what happened to the two?"
Oh! You get the two."
A/CLast edited by Willie Pep 229; 09-01-2023, 05:53 PM.Comment
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