Looking for critique on my Youtube video(s)?

[BXNGCNTRL]

I started my Youtube channel a while ago. At first I was really bad at editing, didn’t write good scripts and made quite a few mistakes with pronunciations. I am starting to get better, but I want to improve more. Please feel free to give me tips and tops, regarding editing, content, voice over, etc. I would really appreciate it!

Here is the link to my latest video:
https://********/Z8OwIGa-xW0

[YoungManRumble]

First note is maybe don't show a clip of Wilder while saying "high fight IQ"

Just busting your balls though.

Looks like an interesting concept for a video, don't have time to watch it all now but I gave you a sub for putting in the effort.

Personally I'm not super fond of the listicle style of videos but it seems to be a pretty effective format for mainstream YouTube success.

[Ben Bolt]

Please feel free to give me tips and tops, regarding editing

Let's focus on the editing ... it's a work of art!

[Mushashi]

3 seconds in reminds me of WatchMojo.. that isn't a bad thing, if your content is easy to watch and the info you're presenting is digestible.

Make the blurb in the description box shorter. I know it's a transcription of your narration at the start but it takes less effort to read a quick summary

Watched the Wilder-Fury entry and yeah it's like a combination of WatchMojo and The Modern Martial Artist describing boxing strategies. Interesting combination. Good luck

[PeepeePoopooMan]

[QUOTE=YoungManRumble;21074994]First note is maybe don't show a clip of Wilder while saying "high fight IQ"

Just busting your balls though.

Looks like an interesting concept for a video, don't have time to watch it all now but I gave you a sub for putting in the effort.

Personally I'm not super fond of the listicle style of videos but it seems to be a pretty effective format for mainstream YouTube success.[/QUOTE]

Lmfao was gonna comment just that.


Agree with what you said. Really good video in my opinion. But if he were to do list type videos he should title it within the decade or division. But its still really good

[BXNGCNTRL]

First note is maybe don't show a clip of Wilder while saying "high fight IQ"

Just busting your balls though.

Looks like an interesting concept for a video, don't have time to watch it all now but I gave you a sub for putting in the effort.

Personally I'm not super fond of the listicle style of videos but it seems to be a pretty effective format for mainstream YouTube success.

I completely agree with you on the Wilder part. I was not referencing him, but after the video I realized what I had done. And I couldn't be bothered to re-edit and render it. Thank you for your comment!

[BXNGCNTRL]

3 seconds in reminds me of WatchMojo.. that isn't a bad thing, if your content is easy to watch and the info you're presenting is digestible.

Make the blurb in the description box shorter. I know it's a transcription of your narration at the start but it takes less effort to read a quick summary

Watched the Wilder-Fury entry and yeah it's like a combination of WatchMojo and The Modern Martial Artist describing boxing strategies. Interesting combination. Good luck

Awesome! Thank you for your feedback, I appreciate it!

[Murcielago]

The intro with the purple logo reminded me of a gamer channel or a phone review channel. The logo doesn't make me think of boxing.... I guess I now see the C for "Central" inside the B for "Boxing, it still looks odd to me.

The voice, seems like a bit edited, nasally, like it's your real voice but you ran it through a audio editor to speed it up a tad bit.

I do like your thumbnails, all following the same format, they look clean and I like the topics you pick.

[Zaroku]

I enjoyed it!

[F!x]

Very well produced and well narrated video. Perhaps calling Floyd "the greatest" is bringing personal opinion into it. And the topic of GOAT is one of the most hotly debated in boxing. But your video is more of an informative analysis video about gameplans. Sometimes remaining a bit more neutral is a better approach. Could have said "one of the greats" for example. But that's an extremely minor point. Overall excellent job and a great video!