Pretty good article, a little bit long but that's cool. You probably could've merged some of the paragraphs and condensed some of the sentences but overall, it was very well-written.
On the other hand, if you want to be a respected writer, then you need to take out that Pac/Morales sig that you have(especially if you want the Mexican fans to read your articles - I can't blame xcaret for hating on your writing). I know you're doing it just for fun but it's pretty distasteful considering that sig/image will be seen everytime you make a post.
On the other hand, if you want to be a respected writer, then you need to take out that Pac/Morales sig that you have(especially if you want the Mexican fans to read your articles - I can't blame xcaret for hating on your writing). I know you're doing it just for fun but it's pretty distasteful considering that sig/image will be seen everytime you make a post.
How about instead a statistical round table discussion on the Boom Boom-Bonilla fight?
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