Make a boxing story

[PainfromUkraine]

A young boy had a pet pigeon, a big bully came along and killed it. Now that young boy has used the anger towards the big bully and picked up the gloves and became a superstar. Don't kill pigeons, you won't become a superstar.

The story of Mike Tyson?

[Xpert]

The story of Mike Tyson?

It was a good choice, the story doesn't HAVE to be fiction, but that's cool too.

[PainfromUkraine]

It was a good choice, the story doesn't HAVE to be fiction, but that's cool too.

You misunderstood, I was referring to the post from the other guy and his story about the bully killing the guy's pigeon, was a joke regarding Mike Tyson and his pet pigeons I can't really think of my own original story at the moment. I'll get back to you if I do...

EDIT - here we go, this is an extract from an article I read - would make a good story:

Two brothers from the wrong side of the tracks turn their backs on street gangs and learn boxing. By sheer determination they become world heavyweight champions. But just when they find fame and fortune, they face the toughest fight of all, one that could cost them everything. The gangsters have taken over the country and only the brothers could possibly beat them. Can they win this ultimate bout and save their country? Against a snowy backdrop of burning cars, street battles, and beautiful leading ladies, they boldly head to a climactic showdown.

[edgarg]

You have completely missed the point of my story. Besides, this thread is not about my story, but the stories of you, the readers. So make some stories with deep messages.

For people to have missed the "point" of the story, there first has to be a point....

My story also begins ...;' "There were four friends, being the two Klitschko Brothers, Valuev, Price and Fury. Then it dawned on us that we somehow had to eliminate one of them so as to comply with the rules of very simple arithmetic....... We brought in an underworld hit-man who called himself "the Hay-mon" (he still spoke with a West Indies accent) who decided that it would be best to cut off one head. This couldn't be done, because, as mentioned, they were friends......and no one has volunteered to be the victim. So they are thinking about it....... One suggestion was that they call in another underworld figure, Floyd Mayweather alias "Phoney Phloyd", who was noted for being the top lb4lb "picker" and was never seen without a large bag of over-ripe cherries, one of his weaknesses, of which he had many. The deed had to be done by May 5th.,....... so they are still waiting.....

As the story winds down-without ever having been wound-up-(pun not intended) the reader is faced with the inescapable fact that whoever reads this, and the original "story", should have his head examined for defects, and, if found to be unblemished, to go back to kindergarten, and learn that the fingers of one hand amount to FIVE.....

[Xpert]

For people to have missed the "point" of the story, there first has to be a point....

My story also begins ...;' "There were four friends, being the two Klitschko Brothers, Valuev, Price and Fury. Then it dawned on us that we somehow had to eliminate one of them so as to comply with the rules of very simple arithmetic....... We brought in an underworld hit-man who called himself "the Hay-mon" (he still spoke with a West Indies accent) who decided that it would be best to cut off one head. This couldn't be done, because, as mentioned, they were friends......and no one has volunteered to be the victim. So they are thinking about it....... One suggestion was that they call in another underworld figure, Floyd Mayweather alias "Phoney Phloyd", who was noted for being the top lb4lb "picker" and was never seen without a large bag of over-ripe cherries, one of his weaknesses, of which he had many. The deed had to be done by May 5th.,....... so they are still waiting.....

As the story winds down-without ever having been wound-up-(pun not intended) the reader is faced with the inescapable fact that whoever reads this, and the original "story", should have his head examined for defects, and, if found to be unblemished, to go back to kindergarten, and learn that the fingers of one hand amount to FIVE.....

Man, that's quite a hater right there.

[soul_survivor]

Make a boxing story. The challenge is, it gotta contain a message. The message of my story is: Racism is ******, especially in an interethnical sport with as many different champions from many different nations as boxing. But your story can have just the message you want it to.

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DRAMA AT THE BAR - by Xpert
The five friends, Vitali Klitschko, Wladimir Klitschko, Nikolai Valuev, David Price and Tyson Fury, who called themselves "The Tall White Guy Gang", were hanging out at a bar. Suddenly, two other tall guys enter the bar. Lennox Lewis and Deontay Wilder.
- Lennox: Yo, Vitali, still got a scar?
- Vitali: Leave me alone, Lennox!
- Lennox: No, I won't.
Vitali stands up, ready to fight. ****! Lennox punches him in the head, resulting in a big injury bleeding heavily.
- Lennox: This time, no referee will save your life!
Lennox punches him again. Tyson Fury steps forward to help, but Deontay Wilder steps in front of him.
- Fury: Wow wow wow, relax, man, I ain't got no problem with you! I got an upcoming fight against that tatooed guy, Omar, that's what the fans wants to see.
- Wilder: Coward, I dare you to send me that contract!
- Fury: No! I wanna fight Chisora afterwards! Maybe... after a tuneup fight...
David Haye enters the bar and sees Valuev.
- Haye: Remember me, you big shack?
Haye punches Valuev, who starts running for his life. Haye sees Price.
- Haye: Should I call Tony Thompson?
Price is shocked.
- Price: No thanks.
- Haye: Good, you dog. But he's on his way here.
Tony Thompson enters the bar and jumps up on a table.
- Tony: Yo, everybody, listen! **** racism! I lost to Kubrat Pulev and he's white! Don't be scared to fight us because we're black! Racism should never be tolerated and despite our different colors, then the fans would love to see us fight against each other. So let's give the fans the fights they deserve instead of ducking because of something ****** like racism! We're all humans and we can all be heroes like Malcolm X and Nelson Mandela and Martin Luther King! One love, one humanity!
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Yeah, I'm a bored lonely guy on drugs, but I think it had a beautiful message.

You are quite simply Petarded

[I_like_wendys]

I was in between 7th and 8th grade when the 1st Bowe Golota fight happened . My entire extended family was at my uncle's place. When the DQ happened, he threw a beer at his TV and missed.

We never watched another fight at my uncle's after that.Not cuz anyone cared that he hit his wall with a beer bottle, the cable company found out he was pirating cable.

[BennyST]

For people to have missed the "point" of the story, there first has to be a point....

My story also begins ...;' "There were four friends, being the two Klitschko Brothers, Valuev, Price and Fury. Then it dawned on us that we somehow had to eliminate one of them so as to comply with the rules of very simple arithmetic....... We brought in an underworld hit-man who called himself "the Hay-mon" (he still spoke with a West Indies accent) who decided that it would be best to cut off one head. This couldn't be done, because, as mentioned, they were friends......and no one has volunteered to be the victim. So they are thinking about it....... One suggestion was that they call in another underworld figure, Floyd Mayweather alias "Phoney Phloyd", who was noted for being the top lb4lb "picker" and was never seen without a large bag of over-ripe cherries, one of his weaknesses, of which he had many. The deed had to be done by May 5th.,....... so they are still waiting.....

As the story winds down-without ever having been wound-up-(pun not intended) the reader is faced with the inescapable fact that whoever reads this, and the original "story", should have his head examined for defects, and, if found to be unblemished, to go back to kindergarten, and learn that the fingers of one hand amount to FIVE.....

You embarrass yourself Edgard. Just stop. You've sunk low enough.

[Xpert]

Seriously, people, stop hating on each other and just get started with some stories. If you're lucky, I will make a new story that will be even better and deeper than the first.

[Xpert]

I should have added Arthur Abraham to this story as one of the few white fighters who would never be scared to fight a black boxer.