I humbly ask for your feedback

[JM1]

im the guy with a shirt on. i apologize for the poor vid quality

[Larry the boss]

not bad at all

[SplitSecond]

i've watched 10 seconds and can already tell you're much better than the majority in here

im gonna watch the rest now

[Fox McCloud]

Take that shirt off. I can't see how well you... take body punches.

[JM1]

not bad at all

thanks larry. you got any tips for me? im the type who wants to box and move use my jab and counter. i learn boxing from watching the likes of floyd, cotto, anselmo moreno, devon alexander

[Fox McCloud]

Just kidding.

You commit a little too much to your right hand, leaving you open for a counterpunch.
You lean in when throwing your right, which also leaves you off balance.
Your right hand loops a little sometimes... make sure to throw it straight.
When you punch, your hands stay down for a bit, get them back around your head/torso quicker for better defensive purposes.
You also leap in a little bit sometimes... be careful. Jumping into a punch is a way to assure future knockout losses on your resume.

That said, you look quite good for an unknown amateur. Keep up the good work!

EDIT: The jab looks really good. Keep working on it on the bag to make it quicker, stronger, etc. Repetition builds the muscles that will make it quicker and harder.

[SilverSun]

thanks larry. you got any tips for me? im the type who wants to box and move use my jab and counter. i learn boxing from watching the likes of floyd, cotto, anselmo moreno, devon alexander

You gotta learn how to take a knee like Cotto

[SERVILEV]

pretty good man, u kinda fight like cotto too.

[Larry the boss]

thanks larry. you got any tips for me? im the type who wants to box and move use my jab and counter. i learn boxing from watching the likes of floyd, cotto, anselmo moreno, devon alexander

just keep up the hard work you look fine imo

[Check_hooks]

decent for a newb but there was room for improvement on everything. You backpedel too much and you said HA HA HA like Devon Alexander even when you aren't close to landing. You need to learn how to faint and get better footwork.