maybe you can get a C this year instead of a D like last year!
My Cotto-Mosley Article for class
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I gave the article to my teacher today. She told me what she wants me to do with it. It actually needs to be longer than it is and i need some quotations in there. Thanks for the criticism/comments guys. Im no writer, but i figure since im stuck in this class all year I will just do most of my articles on boxing because i have an interest in it. I will post the final article when im done with it to see what you guys think. Remember this is my first year ever in journailsm and this is my first article ever.
Also does anybody know where i can download Microsoft Word for FREE. Im using notepad and it sucks, it doesnt even have spell check.Comment
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I'll tell u what, I've never read a book in my life so don't expect me to read ur article. u just hope ur professor feels the same way. HAHAHA I'm kidding. About the spelling check, don't worry about it. It is a good article and there are not a lot of people that can brag about perfect grammar. I like most points u made.Thanks, and yea your probably right, i jsut like to write stuff so the average person can understand it. I noticed a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes in the article but it will get edited. I only had one day to write the article so I know its nothing great. I would have liked to habe gone into deeper details about things. I dont care what i get, as long as i pass
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i would add the magnificient under card fight with GOLDEN SCHLONG as well to add icing to your cake. you'll probably get an A+ if you include a couple lines about GOLDNE SCHLONGComment
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