Imagine this?!!!?? Part one

The Police told me later that some guys were trying to get the woman messed up by giving her the X. She got spooked and took off and was trying to get into houses, probably thinking they were her own house. I am VERY GLAD I didnt hit her. yeah, good thing you didn't hit her, between knocking the fat puerto rican girl down a flight of rows and and hitting another one strung out on x .... take it easy ice, breathe baby, breathe.

The Police told me later that some guys were trying to get the woman messed up by giving her the X. She got spooked and took off and was trying to get into houses, probably thinking they were her own house. I am VERY GLAD I didnt hit her. X-men :cop: :dead1:

The Police told me later that some guys were trying to get the woman messed up by giving her the X. She got spooked and took off and was trying to get into houses, probably thinking they were her own house. I am VERY GLAD I didnt hit her.

I wrote that in less than 10 minutes..didnt proof read etc..just threw it on to see what people might think of a story like that.. test run :) That was pretty good. Can't wait for part duece.

Ice man...that was a great bit of writing...a great start...gripping middle..and all wrapped up nicely with a great change of direction at the end...excellant..

thats crazy shit. Nice read, thanks for sharing Ice.

remember that one dude who posted on here about sparring on ecstasy and how he liked the taste of his own blood when he was fucked up

I hate that movie. i thought it was an alright movie

Books usually are better, because they don't have a time limit or anything. I hate the movie because it was forced upon me. I had a class where we watched that movie for 5 days!!!!!!!!!! We finished it after 2 days so we watched it again. Then we finished again, so we watched it again. it could have been a much worse movie, ever think about that? I would get the book its like 5 bucks easy read and goes places the movie never even glipsed.

dude its a classic, The book was much better though. Books usually are better, because they don't have a time limit or anything. I hate the movie because it was forced upon me. I had a class where we watched that movie for 5 days!!!!!!!!!! We finished it after 2 days so we watched it again. Then we finished again, so we watched it again.

I hate that movie.dude its a classic, The book was much better though.

Esay answer grab the shot gun that lies next to my door 10 gauge seni auto have a nice day. If some one was in the wrong fuckit you violating my home. My name is Amego Montoya prepare to die. I hate that movie.

Besides I don't live with my parents altough they keep their shot gun in the same spot I do.

Not to mention I live in a white middle class nieghborhoot two houses down from the police station.

... So you are sitting at home one night watching TV with your father... maybe even watching a fight. Partway through the fight you both fall asleep, he on the couch and you in the chair that sits maybe seven feet from the front door to your house. The house is pitch black except for the illumination from the TV. All of a sudden there is a loud noise that instantly pulls you from your sleep and as you literally jump up out of the chair your attention is drawn to your left where a person you can't even see has burst into the house right through the front door... it is a woman and she is babbling incoherently, sounding almost like a cave woman or something. Instantly, in the midst of your grogginess, you realize that the woman is your girlfriend and you instantly feel a rush of fear... why is he running into your house at this hour of the night (close to midnight) babbling like she is... you start yelling her name until your attention is diverted to the right, towards your front door, where you hear several men out on your front porch and it is instantly clear that they are attempting to come in your house after her!!! You are yelling at her "Rita! What's going on???? What's happening?!?" Your whole body is tingling the whole time with those chills you get up and down your back when you are shocked or scared without warning. Still in a semi-daze you rush to the front door without waiting for her answer and hurl your body into it, trying to stop these guys from coming into your house and -from what you are thinking- kill your girlfriend!! Maybe they are trying to rape her? Maybe they are trying to kill her, maybe she saw something and they want her quieted? WHO KNOWS AT THAT POINT, RIGHT?? So you are literally fearing for your life now because you are pushing on the door trying to close it and these guys are pushing back trying to come in. Your father is up now and he is yelling, he just woke up, and he is trying to figure it all out, too. Meanwhile your wife has rushed to the back door of the house and is trying to get out but it is dark and she can't figure out how to get out so she turns back around towards you.... You are trying to get the door shut and as you battle these guys you are thinking they might be able to power their way in and if they do you assume they have guns or some other weapons. You imagine and brace yourself for the fact that you will have to smash as many of them as you can on their way in, hopefully you knock one or two of them out before they get you. That will at least give Rita and your father time to get out of the house through some other door. You are pushing and pushing, trying to hold on to your balance as you plan for them to get through and you will have to hit them as hard as you can as many times as you can. You remember thiking how all your punches are going to be aimed right for their chins. You are pushing and pushing with all your might, yelling something at them that you now cannot even recall, when suddenly you feel the door slam and it hits you all at once that you have overpowered them and gotten the door shut... instantly you reach down and flip the lock so they will have to literally bust the door down if they want to get in now. You turn around and head towards Rita who is coming back towards you through the kitchen, still babbling loudly and in a serious rush.. it is obvious she is TERRIFIED and wants to get out of there as soon as she can..... you still are seriously wondering what is going on and you plan to grab her and calm her down so you can find out before these guys outside at midnight in the dark decided to smash through the front door and finish what they started. You rush towards your girl and are almost up on her - she is rushing back towards you when her face is suddenly and briefly visible through the darkness by way of the light from the street light coming through the picture window...... as soon as you see her face there is just one thought that pops into your head....and it sends even more chills flooding up and down your spine.... ,,,,,,, >>>>>>>> "That ain't Rita!!!" PART TWO COMING SOON :)Esay answer grab the shot gun that lies next to my door 10 gauge seni auto have a nice day. If some one was in the wrong fuckit you violating my home. My name is Amego Montoya prepare to die.

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Part 2, the conclusion PART TWO........ So she is coming towards you and you see it is NOT who you thought it was. There are several guys out in front of your house that you would assume are figuring out a way in... you instinctively move out of the way and let this person who you now know to be a total stranger run by you and down the stairs towards what you assume is the side door out into the yard... you run to the front door and yell out through it "She went out the side" because you just want these guys to leave. You will call the police and hopefully they will rush to the scene and get this woman and these guys. You hear a lot of noise down in your den, though, and it quickly occurs to you that the woman has not found her way through the darkness and out of the house but instead of that she is rummaging around your den, knocking stuff over as she does who knows what down there. You rush down the stairs and into even thicker darkness and head straight to where you think the light switch is. You fumble with it badly, though, in your still dazed state... trying again and again to get the dimmer switch on while you hear her in the background mumbling something as she tries to free herself from the web of tables and chairs she apparently has herself caught in. Is she crazy? Is she coming over to stab me? Maybe she has a gun? Finally you get the light on and quickly turn around to see this wild eyed female coming from around a table at the other end of the room as she grabs a picture frame off the wall that you assume she is going to try and hit you with once she gets close enough. You don't remember exactly what you say to her but it is something along the lines of "Dont get stupid or I'm gonna' have to clip you." Just as you are thinking that, though, another dilemma pops up for you to deal with as you hear the men from outside barge their way into the house and rush in as they yell something that you are too discombobulated to even comprehend. So here they come, you know they are coming down the stairs and in less than ten seconds you know this whole crazy situation is about to reach its conclusion. It is going down right here and now whether you are ready for it or not!! She is about three feet away from you at this point and you are still considering dropping her with a shot when all of a sudden you heard the words that change the whole situation in an instant...... ................ >>>> "We're in!!! We're in the house. Windsor Police, we're in the house!!" Those words immediately throw a wave of relief over you and you instantly get that feeling you get when you realize that things aren't quite bad as you thought they were just moments earlier. A certain amount of relief washes over you and at the moment when the woman reaches arms length, instead of reacting violently, you grab her right arm with your left hand and spin her like a top towards the stairs and when her back is to you you give her a two handed push towards the uniformed officers that have by now headed down the stairs. They grab her and even though she puts up a good fight they quickly manage to get her under control and whisk her out into your driveway where they hold her down until an ambulance comes to take her away. This is a true story and I know for sure it is because it happened to me just a few weeks ago on the night of Spinks-Karmazin. Apparently the woman was given some drugs by some guys, I'm told it was ecstasy, and she had a bad reaction to it that caused her to run away and attempt to enter houses in my neighborhood only to keep running into locked doors. My door wasn't locked because I was planning on leaving right after the Spinks-Karmazin fight was over and when the police came to answer the several 911 calls from my neighbors they found her in a daze sitting on my front porch. When the officers approached her I guess she got so shook up that she turned and ran to the best looking escape route which also happened to be my front door that was located right behind her. Epilogue: The woman may have been in a bad way, incoherent etc. but she did have a good sense of timing, I will give her that. Because if she didn't burst into the house when she did I would not have woken up during the ninth round of the Spinks-Karmazin fight and I would have missed the last couple rounds when Spinks was fatigued so badly and spent the 12th and final round running away instead of closing the show on a very close fight. With this crazy lady still out in my driveway being watched over by three police cars with lights flashing waiting for an ambulance to arrive I was inside my house thinking one thing and one thing only: "If Jose (Rivera) was in there right now Spinks would be in biiiiiiiiiiiiiig trouble!!" LOL (TRUE STORY!!!)

I wrote that in less than 10 minutes..didnt proof read etc..just threw it on to see what people might think of a story like that.. test run :)

delivery.. dont read at all if its all the same But I like reading your posts / stories. I thought it was pretty good. I was just saying it would be a lot easier on the eyes to read.