1st rap i wrote in awhile

[Larry the boss]

[Rip Chudd]

Listening to that was like the equivalent of watching juggernaut hit the bag

[Larry the boss]

Listening to that was like the equivalent of watching juggernaut hit the bag

....

[ukbox]

Larry, you tried your best but you failed miserably
In 16 bars you went from being thought of as Broner to Dwayne Dibbley
Now you're probably watching gay ****, hand in your pants getting fiddly
Drinking cheap beer wishing you hadn't sold that kidney
You're on that paper chase & you're a bit of rogue one
But ffs man that was more Rue Paul than Logan

[Rip Chudd]

Larry, you tried your best but you failed miserably
In 16 bars you went from being thought of as Broner to Dwayne Dibbley
Now you're probably watching gay ****, hand in your pants getting fiddly
Drinking cheap beer wishing you hadn't sold that kidney
You're on that paper chase & you're a bit of rogue one
But ffs man that was more Rue Paul than Logan

Bars!!!!!!!!!!

[travestyny]

I'm feeling it. There's a message behind your words and your flow seems similar to a 2pac type flow. Keep doing ya thing.

[Zn1]

Larry, you tried your best but you failed miserably
In 16 bars you went from being thought of as Broner to Dwayne Dibbley
Now you're probably watching gay ****, hand in your pants getting fiddly
Drinking cheap beer wishing you hadn't sold that kidney
You're on that paper chase & you're a bit of rogue one
But ffs man that was more Rue Paul than Logan

that lyric has legs!!

[DARKSEID]

Real talk larry, that was tight.

I feel what you're speaking about and the beat is ill, it was too short though, if you want to create something do it all in. Make something great, dive into what you're doing, don't just tip toe above the waters.

You got a talent and you should use it. Make some real shlt and put your heart and soul into it. Remember that those that do what's easy will never be remembered.

[DARKSEID]

"The government really pushing for a race war
democrat republican it's just a double sword
I swear man they really trying to outlaw the lord
they got a ship but only rich folks can get aboard
*inaudible* poor folks kill poor folks, natural selection"


That was deep as ****

[ukbox]

Larry, give this guy a listen. He's cerebral & one of the best of british, guy has content rather than nonsense 👍🏻