Originally posted by Roberto_Roldan_
Asian your writing is alright but there's no style or panache about it. There’s no humour or flair for the language. It just seems to be a pretty factual method of writing and it’s not telling anyone anything they didn’t already know. Anyone can do a bit of research and describe what’s happening but to make it original and create a niche for yourself you need to assert your own personality. Add a bit of humour and some original ideas that aren’t just the same **** everyone is saying...and cut down on the ****ing length.
Having said that I’m sure you will improve and go on to be a successful writer.

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