The Heavyweight Division: Can anyone step Forward? (My Column)

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  • TheHoff!
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    #11
    Originally posted by Roberto_Roldan_
    i dont lose interest man...
    I do.

    Asian your writing is alright but there's no style or panache about it. There’s no humour or flair for the language. It just seems to be a pretty factual method of writing and it’s not telling anyone anything they didn’t already know. Anyone can do a bit of research and describe what’s happening but to make it original and create a niche for yourself you need to assert your own personality. Add a bit of humour and some original ideas that aren’t just the same **** everyone is saying...and cut down on the ****ing length.

    Having said that I’m sure you will improve and go on to be a successful writer.
    Last edited by TheHoff!; 06-25-2006, 06:46 PM.

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    • kayjay
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      #12
      Great column.

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      • ferocity
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        #13
        I already don't like the title, i havn't read your article but unless you arn't counting wlad, then no one has steped up, i think wlad fighting peters then fighting byrd is a step up, but fighting briggs is a step down, so maybe you title fits....

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        • Mr. Ryan
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          #14
          Thanks alot for the feedback. I was asked by someone to do this article at another site, so I just forced it all out. Its not my best article with regards to creativity, but its a very good research sheet for anyone wondering whats going on in the division. Ferocity, I do think Wladimir has the inside track as far as being the best, but his recent wins have come against fighters who stylistically are made for Klitschko. Byrd, Peter and other smaller men can't really hit him at will like Rahman can. I would rather not have a heavyweight champ with 3 KO losses, but what can you do?

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          • BrooklynBomber
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            #15
            Originally posted by Asian Sensation
            Thanks alot for the feedback. I was asked by someone to do this article at another site, so I just forced it all out. Its not my best article with regards to creativity, but its a very good research sheet for anyone wondering whats going on in the division. Ferocity, I do think Wladimir has the inside track as far as being the best, but his recent wins have come against fighters who stylistically are made for Klitschko. Byrd, Peter and other smaller men can't really hit him at will like Rahman can. I would rather not have a heavyweight champ with 3 KO losses, but what can you do?
            Peter is "taylor" made for Klitscko the same way Brewster or Sanders was.
            Rahman?
            Rahman showed nothing couple of past fights that suggested he can hang and "hit at will" Wlad.
            The only guy, amongst champs, to pose threat is Sergey.
            Lamon, ofcourse if he is what he is anything he used to be, is also a threat to Wlad, Rahman, he could not pressure Toney, for Gods sake, he wont be able to pressure Wlad either, for different reasons though.

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