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  • Dan A
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    Hi everyone, check out this p4p video I'm working on

    Hi everyone, first post here :S Please watch my boxing video if you get a chance

    >https://********/NYu6H1OyLr4<


    Its my first video so its a bit rough around the edges. Advise and criticism appreciated
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    #2
    Done a good job mate there is lots of material for the topic you chose , only nag for me was its too long and gets monotonous , with that length you need a story attached and transitions within the that story giving a flow from beginning to end , the way you have done it it only needs to run about 3 minutes , you could condense the best into that 3 min time frame and play with your zoom and speed from the original clips used to empathise some things .

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    • Beercules
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      #3
      Reloaded you need to learn how to space paragraphs you dumb ****.

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      • Beercules
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        #4
        OP embed the video.

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        • PAC-BOY
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          #5
          Originally posted by Beercules
          Reloaded you need to learn how to space paragraphs you dumb ****.
          He needs to change his name from Reloaded to Retarded

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          • Reloaded
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            #6
            Originally posted by Beercules
            Reloaded you need to learn how to space paragraphs you dumb ****.
            Its a test to make sure the nerdy imbeciles like you are reading it and you fell in like quicksand lol .

            So buddy how are you going to flunk out on life have you decided yet , I can tell you're off to a flying start to nowhere .

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            • Reloaded
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              #7
              Originally posted by PAC-BOY
              He needs to change his name from Reloaded to Retarded
              I cant take that from you , you earned it years ago the way you fell into Manny and his BS youre a natural .

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              • Beercules
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                #8
                Originally posted by Reloaded
                Its a test to make sure the nerdy imbeciles like you are reading it and you fell in like quicksand lol .

                So buddy how are you going to flunk out on life have you decided yet , I can tell you're off to a flying start to nowhere .
                You have like 2 weeks to live old man, if that.

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                • Reloaded
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                  #9
                  Originally posted by Beercules
                  You have like 2 weeks to live old man, if that.
                  How will I know I died , maybe my watch just stopped

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                  • The Problem Child
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                    #10
                    Originally posted by Beercules
                    Reloaded you need to learn how to space paragraphs you dumb ****.

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