Hi everyone, check out this p4p video I'm working on

[Dan A]

Hi everyone, first post here :S Please watch my boxing video if you get a chance

>https://********/NYu6H1OyLr4<


Its my first video so its a bit rough around the edges. Advise and criticism appreciated

[Reloaded]

Done a good job mate there is lots of material for the topic you chose , only nag for me was its too long and gets monotonous , with that length you need a story attached and transitions within the that story giving a flow from beginning to end , the way you have done it it only needs to run about 3 minutes , you could condense the best into that 3 min time frame and play with your zoom and speed from the original clips used to empathise some things .

[Beercules]

Reloaded you need to learn how to space paragraphs you dumb ****.

[Beercules]

OP embed the video.

[PAC-BOY]

Reloaded you need to learn how to space paragraphs you dumb ****.

He needs to change his name from Reloaded to Retarded

[Reloaded]

Reloaded you need to learn how to space paragraphs you dumb ****.

Its a test to make sure the nerdy imbeciles like you are reading it and you fell in like quicksand lol .

So buddy how are you going to flunk out on life have you decided yet , I can tell you're off to a flying start to nowhere .

[Reloaded]

He needs to change his name from Reloaded to Retarded

I cant take that from you , you earned it years ago the way you fell into Manny and his BS youre a natural .

[Beercules]

Its a test to make sure the nerdy imbeciles like you are reading it and you fell in like quicksand lol .

So buddy how are you going to flunk out on life have you decided yet , I can tell you're off to a flying start to nowhere .

You have like 2 weeks to live old man, if that.

[Reloaded]

You have like 2 weeks to live old man, if that.

How will I know I died , maybe my watch just stopped

[The Problem Child]

Reloaded you need to learn how to space paragraphs you dumb ****.