The Perfect Upset: Tyson-Douglas

[Mr. Ryan]

One correction, Tyson regained the title in 96'. LOL...I am a Tyson nerd.

Whatever, I did the essay very quickly. I wanted to go home already.

[Manny_P]

awesome man. way to to show em foos how Filipinos do! LOL! I doin bad in English 102 right now. I got highest C+.

[BadMagick]

I hope someone will post or even view my essay. I put alot of work into it.

Whatever, I did the essay very quickly. I wanted to go home already.

Intersesting....

It was okay, but not deserving of an A+; this is mostly because of grammatical errors. For instance, you switched tenses twice in a sentence: you went from past tense, to present tense, then back to past tense.

I'd like to ask one thing, though: Who is your target audience? I'm not trying to critisize, or anything, but the sentence structuring-- and sometimes content thereof-- is not exactly... "college level," if you know what I'm saying.

[druth]

Intersesting....

It was okay, but not deserving of an A+; this is mostly because of grammatical errors. For instance, you switched tenses twice in a sentence: you went from past tense, to present tense, then back to past tense.

I'd like to ask one thing, though: Who is your target audience? I'm not trying to critisize, or anything, but the sentence structuring-- and sometimes content thereof-- is not exactly... "college level," if you know what I'm saying.

Oh give him a break, he's not a 20 year writer for the New York Post.

[BadMagick]

Oh give him a break, he's not a 20 year writer for the New York Post.

If people don't want their work critiqued they shouldn't post it on a forum.

[Truth]

Whatever, I did the essay very quickly. I wanted to go home already.

Its good, I just the correction.

[Kayo]

great essay i wrote an essay on boxing earlier this year about the death of L.J

[Mr. Ryan]

Intersesting....

It was okay, but not deserving of an A+; this is mostly because of grammatical errors. For instance, you switched tenses twice in a sentence: you went from past tense, to present tense, then back to past tense.

I'd like to ask one thing, though: Who is your target audience? I'm not trying to critisize, or anything, but the sentence structuring-- and sometimes content thereof-- is not exactly... "college level," if you know what I'm saying.

I have a severe marijuana enfatuation, Ya heard!

[Derranged_]

Your essay was engaging and well written; have you thought about a career as a sports writer? Ron Borges is getting old.

[Mr. Ryan]

Your essay was engaging and well written; have you thought about a career as a sports writer? Ron Borges is getting old.

Ron Borges works for the Boston Globe, if I'm not mistaken. I would like a job as a journalist. The problem is the money. This is not how I write normally, I just was forced to meet the teachers criteria.