Mayweather-Ortiz Face Off analysis

[D4thincarnation]

prada shoes

....................really?

I would not recognise them.

I also don't go round commenting on other men's shoes.

Who does?

[louvega]

Just read the blog post. It was one of the worst pieces of fan fiction I've read. 'The cerebral school of Floyd Mayweather', 'pupil', 'demented professor', 'kid', etc... I really wanted to go into detail, but the whole thing is so bad it's just not worth it.

Also, the author seems to lack a solid base in writing form, structure of text and use of punctuation. It reads like someone who takes ideas from mtv songs rather than proper books. Read more, write less, and take a writing class soon.

3/10

[studentofthegam]

There is a quiet confidence to Ortiz. He seems like he may do something this fight.

He'll do somethin'......take a beatin'.

[Konstantin]

Ortiz just happy to be there.
Mayweather expecting an easy fight and is very confident.
Ortiz does not have a gameplan as yet.
Floyd and Ortiz get on well together.
Floyd has a thing for Prada shoes.(How many boxers would have recognised that?)
Ortiz is still mentally fragile.
Floyd does not want to crush him mentally.

This............

[Gino Ros]

I would not recognise them.

I also don't go round commenting on other men's shoes.

Who does?

McNulty: "You know what they call men who care about clothes, don't you?"
Bunk: "Yeah. Grown-ups."

[D4thincarnation]

McNulty: "You know what they call men who care about clothes, don't you?"
Bunk: "Yeah. Grown-ups."

Would you recognise some Prada shoes?

Do you check out other men's shoes?

[MrRolltide91]

Would you recognise some Prada shoes?

Do you check out other men's shoes?

yep.

where you get them jordans they dope?

[RespekonMyName]

Just read the blog post. It was one of the worst pieces of fan fiction I've read. 'The cerebral school of Floyd Mayweather', 'pupil', 'demented professor', 'kid', etc... I really wanted to go into detail, but the whole thing is so bad it's just not worth it.

Also, the author seems to lack a solid base in writing form, structure of text and use of punctuation. It reads like someone who takes ideas from mtv songs rather than proper books. Read more, write less, and take a writing class soon.

3/10

I'm sorry you didn't like the education angle. It also sounds like you don't understand AP style.

Thanks for the critique.

[Beasty]

Who is Victor Ortiz?
NOBODY!

Floyd wins in 12 rounds, he will KO manny in may of next year..

[RespekonMyName]

yep.

where you get them jordans they dope?

lol. This is so true. Brotha's compliment each other on their sneakers all the time. Maybe it's a cultural thing.