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  • as214
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    #1

    Greatest poem ever!!

    I know this classless Puerto Rican fighter named Tito
    His pappi likes to wrap his hands illegally and cheato
    He is overrated, he simply cant box
    Bhop said he was so ******, very easy to outfox
    All he has is a left hook, it's his money punch
    When his countrys flag was thrown on the ground he got his panties in a bunch
    He's not a real man his honor he could not redeem
    He's even more overrated than Prince Naseem
    What a great week ahead looking forward to Saturday night
    He will receive another decisive beatdown this time at the hands of Winky Wright
    He will be ashamed, along with his whole nuthugging Boxing Scene Crew.
    IWatchBoxing will say "I've had Titos nuts in my mouth for so long now what am I to do"

    Then there's that little ****, he goes by Loak
    On Larry Merchants and Titos nuts he will choke
    When he does he will surely croak
    This will be the end of Tito's biggest nuthugging joke
    Only after he bets on Titos, loses all his points and goes broke..

    Good day to you all and have a good night
    As we look forward to Saturday night"s fight
    Last edited by as214; 05-12-2005, 12:59 PM.
  • BadMagick
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    #2
    It was good until the end, when you rhymed night with night. That was pretty weak.

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    • !! Mr. Soprano
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      #3
      There is still room for improvement in your writing skills :-)

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      • The Fix
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        #4
        i know some posters who keep making ****** poem threads
        i truly wish the fell down the stairs and were dead
        or maybe a ******* blast to the head
        it makes no difference to me, you little ones need to go to bed
        jerk off what ever i dont care as long as you dont drink or get fed
        that way youll die....

        from now on i will only respond to poem threads with poems

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        • as214
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          #5
          Originally posted by vdiary
          There is still room for improvement in your writing skills :-)

          I'm at work and it took me two minutes to write.

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          • BBFM
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            #6
            Yo poems are cool good job on it amused me .

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            • as214
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              #7
              Originally posted by The Fix
              i know some posters who keep making ****** poem threads
              i truly wish the fell down the stairs and were dead
              or maybe a ******* blast to the head
              it makes no difference to me, you little ones need to go to bed
              jerk off what ever i dont care as long as you dont drink or get fed
              that way youll die....

              from now on i will only respond to poem threads with poems


              Mad skillz..

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              • IwatchBoxing
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                #8
                As214 likes to say my name
                I know hes gay
                allways on the same thing
                I must be famous
                got this dork amazed
                striaght up **** teased
                wishing he could blow me
                or Trinidad
                or Puerto Rico, which is just an Island
                get off that **** mang
                you hating cause we'er better than you
                messing with you
                so jealous you wish it was you
                couldnt fool me
                I know you mad at us being perfect
                dont shoot yourself get a plastic surgen

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                • The Fix
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                  #9
                  Originally posted by IwatchBoxing
                  As214 likes to say my name
                  I know hes gay
                  allways on the same thing
                  I must be famous
                  got this dork amazed
                  striaght up **** teased
                  wishing he could blow me
                  or Trinidad
                  or Puerto Rico, which is just an Island
                  get off that **** mang
                  you hating cause we'er better than you
                  messing with you
                  so jealous you wish it was you
                  couldnt fool me
                  I know you mad at us being perfect
                  dont shoot yourself get a plastic surgen
                  what do you mean, slipx didnt pay his bet?
                  maybe he no longer has points he could be in debt
                  dont worry.... dont fret, maybe hell die like a tuna caught in a net

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                  • as214
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                    #10
                    Originally posted by IwatchBoxing
                    As214 likes to say my name
                    I know hes gay
                    allways on the same thing
                    I must be famous
                    got this dork amazed
                    striaght up **** teased
                    wishing he could blow me
                    or Trinidad
                    or Puerto Rico, which is just an Island
                    get off that **** mang
                    you hating cause we'er better than you
                    messing with you
                    so jealous you wish it was you
                    couldnt fool me
                    I know you mad at us being perfect
                    dont shoot yourself get a plastic surgen


                    Your poem was weak it didn't even rhyme.
                    You are just Puerto Rican slime.
                    I must go get back to work.
                    So that I can pay my taxes and pay for your peeps welfare you little jerk.
                    Have fun watching the fight Saturday night,
                    and seeing a beatiful, masterful display at the hands of ROnald Winky Wright!!

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