i wrote this article, tell me your opinion

[parrinkinpau]

just wrote this article: tell me what you think? my english is not that good. but anyway i hope you guys like it. it has a lot of reviews, some good and some bad.

the first link is the article i wrote and the second link is the response of manny pacquiao to the article i wrote.

http://www.boxeomundial.net/article_view.php?category=ENGLISH&id=8959

http://philboxing.com/news/column-1130-18474.html

by the way my real name is Hessiquio Balderas if anyone cares

thank you

[Guest]

I liked it brother.
You took a nice new viewpoint and wrote a good, short piece.
Keep it up!

[parrinkinpau]

Thank you very much. it was my debut writing in english. i am glad you liked it.

once again thank you