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Old 12-06-2009, 12:55 AM #1
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Old 12-06-2009, 03:47 PM #2
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Old 12-06-2009, 04:59 PM #3
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Lyrically you're pretty good. At the beginning your voice, diction, and flow were kind of shaky though, so tighten that up. The content sounds fresh, a lot of cats could relate to that. Good luck man, kepp working at it, you'll only get better.
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Old 12-06-2009, 05:19 PM #4
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Pretty average I would say.

Nothing horrible, for a freestyle, but nothing outstanding either. I'm not a rapper or anything, but w.e.

Clumsy flow, though.

And your voice sounds sorta Jay-Z-ish to me.
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Old 12-06-2009, 10:33 PM #5
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if its the one you pmed me. i liked it.
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Old 12-07-2009, 02:54 PM #6
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Pretty average I would say.

Nothing horrible, for a freestyle, but nothing outstanding either. I'm not a rapper or anything, but w.e.

Clumsy flow, though.

And your voice sounds sorta Jay-Z-ish to me.
I thought at as well.

Rumor is his voice is like that from eating butt.
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