Constructive criticism for my Sparring video?

[kbpoetree]

k next thing....i'm only doin this cause u asked for help not tryna overdue the critiquing ur young and so far for ur experience all looks perfectly fine...when he was pressuring u tho u kinda shelled up...now u may have been sayen to urself lets practice some d here..but in that case...simply move....dont have to shell up...jus step back and outta the way u had the whole ring..cept for the time u were in the ropes...well i'm on to the 2nd guy now....oh and the commentating is gr8 actually jus wish i knew everything they were sayen lol..i did notice BHop come outta one of their mouths tho lol

[kbpoetree]

and i've actually watched it all now...i mean i could critique ur form and punch combos all day ur new at the sport...that happens w time u will get it..i'm here to point out the other things most on this site wont point out....most thing that annoyed me was ur footwork...not that it was bad at all..but..like i stated earlier..u moved left the whole time..circle right too change it up...look again u'll notice what i'm sayen..actually i saw some good jabs at the end so ima chalk up the first few rounds to jus bein a nooby u know the technique it comes to sparring w time just not ur first few times..all in all looked good..i think u either didnt like the 2nd guy as much or he mayb more a buddy one the two cause u were def goin harder then....other than that less as of now thats what ima leave u with as the others can point out ur punches/combos etc....but move right right..then left then right..lol change it up son

[thegamesartist]

Wow thanks a lot guys for all your great advice, really can't thank you all enough for taking the time to help out. Also kudos to the guy who sorted my video out!

Key points I noted from what you have all said are;

• Snap my punches like a whip, nice and quick
• Bring hands back to my chin not to my waist
• Dont waste energy weaving when i dont need to
• Go to the body more
• Protect my chin with my shoulder when jabbing
• Move to the right more and mix it up
• Take advantage of when an opponent finishes a combo and stands still
• Be careful not to get timed by rotating my left hand by not over doing it
• Practice different combos
• Dont shell up to defend, move away if i can

I've watched the video countless times to try and spot my weaknesses, but it's great to be able to get feedback from more experienced boxers. Hopefully over the next six months I can work on the above ^^ and build on what I've learned so far.

[kbpoetree]

Wow thanks a lot guys for all your great advice, really can't thank you all enough for taking the time to help out. Also kudos to the guy who sorted my video out!

Key points I noted from what you have all said are;

• Snap my punches like a whip, nice and quick
• Bring hands back to my chin not to my waist
• Dont waste energy weaving when i dont need to
• Go to the body more
• Protect my chin with my shoulder when jabbing
• Move to the right more and mix it up
• Take advantage of when an opponent finishes a combo and stands still
• Be careful not to get timed by rotating my left hand by not over doing it
• Practice different combos
• Dont shell up to defend, move away if i can

I've watched the video countless times to try and spot my weaknesses, but it's great to be able to get feedback from more experienced boxers. Hopefully over the next six months I can work on the above ^^ and build on what I've learned so far.

u got it dude.....best of luck in all.... we always here for helping lol keep us informed