BS Judge my rap skillz...

[LeG00N]

You actually have skills

[ßringer]

I liked the fatality to Baraka reference, but that was about it.

That said, I'm probably not your best option for rap criticism : I mostly only listen to stuff like Saul Williams, Talib Kweli, RUN DMC, DMX, Eminem, Nas, the Beastie Boys, and Mos Def.

[jakdariipa]

Exhibit A and Friends are solid. What program do you use to make beats? It sounds like Fruity Loops.

Thanks bro. Yea its fl studio, The Exhibit A is on Cubase tho.

[jakdariipa]

You actually have skills

Thanks Maniac!

[jakdariipa]

I liked the fatality to Baraka reference, but that was about it.

That said, I'm probably not your best option for rap criticism : I mostly only listen to stuff like Saul Williams, Talib Kweli, RUN DMC, DMX, Eminem, Nas, the Beastie Boys, and Mos Def.

Coo, thanks for the feedback

Exhibit A and Deep Fried Frenz are classics, nobody does it better than Jay Electronica or Doom.

But as far as your skills go, you got some. Stick to one style and perfect it though. Going from that dumb broads Gucci beat to some flips of the Deep Fried Frenz sample is corny.

Yeah Jay Elec murded that ish. yeah these are pretty old tracks. Im just tryna find my lane you kno. And the Friends joint was so my dad can scratch to it at his gigs and stuff

[*2TOUGH*]

are you jack the ripuh??

[bastolio]

are you having a laugh m8?

[jakdariipa]

are you jack the ripuh??

Nah bro.....

[katsidis]

ive heard far far worse, like most rappers around today infact

keep going your not too bad

props for posting the vids

[EdMon917]

But as far as your skills go, you got some. Stick to one style and perfect it though. Going from that dumb broads Gucci beat to some flips of the Deep Fried Frenz sample is corny.

I agree with this but it's obvious the more you write the better you get at it. How long have you been writing for?