U.S.A Poem

[SunSpace]

That's actually pretty dope... I liked it better than aubade... Your poem left it open in the end... There's still life to be had... Where aubade was just dead... Which I guess was its purpose...

Thanks!

Larkin can be grim, but he does it for the sake of exposing what he believed society was afraid to face. It's liberating in a way, but I definitely understand how it's not exactly cheerful.

Depending on the mood and content, there's a bit of everything for everyone in poetry, which is what makes it great.

[DARKSEID]

You know poems are supposed to make the reader feel something, some kind of overwhelming emotion and truth or connection to something bigger than they are.

Nobody knows what the **** you're on about.

Your poems have no structure or depth in any way. It reads like something a 12 year old metrosexual emo would put together in about 2 minutes because he thinks being edgy and artsy is cool, just like putting eye liner and having a female haircut.