I just recorded a song, would love your opinions.

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[Grand Champ]

I am an older member here, so alot of you guys don't know me, but back in the old BoxingScene days, I headed the rap battle movement. Well I just recorded my first song for a mixtape, if any hip-hop enthusiasts would check it out and let me know what you think, i'd appreciate it.

Quite decent.

My advice would be to be a little louder. change your tone a little to avoid a monotone flow..

All in all it was pretty good. Keep us posted with your tracks as you make'em..!

[-PANDA-]

its good but uve got to put more emotion into ur voice...it would suit this track really well

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its good but uve got to put more emotion into ur voice...it would suit this track really well

Thans alot, I appreciate that. I've been hearing that from a few people so I will do that next time.

Quite decent.

My advice would be to be a little louder. change your tone a little to avoid a monotone flow..

All in all it was pretty good. Keep us posted with your tracks as you make'em..!

Thanks, and I definitely will. Appreciate the critique.

[Dorian]

Not bad, I agree with more emotion in the voice but other than that it was decent. Keep it up man!

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Not bad, I agree with more emotion in the voice but other than that it was decent. Keep it up man!

Thanks alot man, appreciate it. I was recording it late last night using this program called "Audacity" with an external plug in microphone and cheap Doss headphones, and trying not to wake my roomates. Hopefully the next one i'll be able to do better.

[Southpaw Stinger]

Meh, save your breath. You'll need it to blow up your date.

[Equilibrium]

You have some good lyrics and punch lines and i feel what you say however you need to work on your flow, rhyme patterns and voice control.

But keep it up, write verses on different type of beats to practice actually rapping, freestyle as much as you can, this is where you will learn to have different flows and use your voice.


I have been doing music myself for the past 10 years, but mine is in french, so it would not be relevant to most people here.

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You have some good lyrics and punch lines and i feel what you say however you need to work on your flow, rhyme patterns and voice control.

But keep it up, write verses on different type of beats to practice actually rapping, freestyle as much as you can, this is where you will learn to have different flows and use your voice.


I have been doing music myself for the past 10 years, but mine is in french, so it would not be relevant to most people here.

Thanks for the input, what kind of music do you do?

[Equilibrium]

Thanks for the input, what kind of music do you do?

Rap just like you.

I would suggest listening to tons of music, not only rap, listen to rock, classic, metal, whatever you want, as long as you like it. I assure you will you learn things about music and better yourself by just doing that.

I listen to rap, rock, classic, reggae, blues, jazz, hell i even like damn country. I have over 100 gigs of music in my pc and my father's whole vynil collection.(like 200+)

It's also great for finding good samples.