Hopelessly bound
unfettered
by the chains of love's grip
- greatest gift,
fate's cruelest curse.

Wherefore do I weep
at knowing the joy,
the warmth,
at feeling the peace,
the fire.

Wherefore do I weep
unable to complete ,
to be,
unknown the kiss,
the flames.

Wherefore do I weep
at loving not living
seeing not touching
breathing not sharing
holding not loving?

All,
because I, The Fool,
am no more?

So did you write that?

Thats Real Good

I get in this ****ed up slumps every now and then. But I get creative or smash people at the gym pretty good. Yes I did.

I will confess I had my aunt look at it before I ut it here. She is an english teacher, so I guess that is cheating but she did not fix anything but some spelling errors.

Do you say "unfettered" in your daily language?

Nice ****ing poem dude.
Here is a hiaku for you.
I gotta **** now..

Do you say "unfettered" in your daily language?

No I do not use it everyday.LOL

My Haiku:

Sick and feverish
Glimpse of cherry blossoms
Still shivering