View Full Version : Dodge Viper - Concept Style Art (My Drawing)...Please Critique.


Magic Man
12-14-2003, 08:04 AM
Hey guys, I've been busy sketching my ass off since finishing uni - I'm applying for an artist job with a local computer game studio (Ratbag Studios - www.ratbaggames.com) and I want to put together a professional looking portfolio so I have a better chance of getting a job there.

They are looking for people with degrees in industrial design, or visual communication - of which I have neither, so I'll probably be up against some pretty stiff competition.

The company specialises in racing games...actually, thats all they make, so I guess I have to submit at least a few pieces of art to do with vehicles. I've NEVER done any car drawings before, I prefer to do character designs and stuff like that, so I've been spending the last few days drawing cars non-stop. I decided I don't really want to go to all the trouble of designing a car from concept, so I used an existing car - in the Dodge Viper, and did a concept style piece just to demonstrate that I have a grasp of Photoshop (I also did the pen and marker sketch).

If you have any critiques, please voice them - I want to produce an A1 portfolio for their consideration, this is my first piece (I'll also throw in a few of my better character designs I guess).

Scanned image (Pen and marker on bleedproofpaper): http://www.users.on.net/bobbyeow/Art/Viper_Scan_Image.jpg

Final image after photoshop: http://www.users.on.net/bobbyeow/Art/Viper_Full_Colour.jpg

Cheers, M.

Stain
12-14-2003, 09:53 AM
you've got some serious skills MagicMan...

Bella
12-14-2003, 11:24 AM
Those are the ****, MM.

Can you do caricatures?

Fallout
12-14-2003, 11:25 AM
I wish I had half the talent of guys like you and lightweight

Curly Howard
12-14-2003, 11:25 AM
what does aerobics have to do with art Bella???

Jeez

Bella
12-14-2003, 11:27 AM
That was hilarious for some reason.

lightweight
12-14-2003, 11:38 AM
Those look great, good look with the job man.

Curly Howard
12-14-2003, 11:42 AM
here's my idea for the new Dodge

http://www.neutralzonehockey.com/general.jpg

here's the viper
http://www.skywriterpress.com/Resources/dot3.gif

Fallout
12-14-2003, 11:42 AM
Send that to maddox

nance
12-14-2003, 12:59 PM
Originally posted by Curly Howard
here's my idea for the new Dodge

http://www.neutralzonehockey.com/general.jpg

here's the viper
http://www.skywriterpress.com/Resources/dot3.gif

The General!!! I love that car!

momita
12-14-2003, 05:55 PM
You made the car look like it could drive off the page Magic! I hope you get the job to use your beautiful talent!

realkaps
12-14-2003, 06:12 PM
The body looks like its an acutal picture in the colored pic MM, good stuff.....

Purity
12-14-2003, 07:00 PM
pretty cool mm. kinda looks like a cross between a ferrari modena and a viper. got any other angles?

Fallout
12-14-2003, 07:05 PM
I like Carls picture better

Magic Man
12-14-2003, 07:33 PM
Originally posted by Curly Howard
here's the viper
http://www.skywriterpress.com/Resources/dot3.gif

Holy mother****!

**** the viper, THE 3 WHEELED CAR IS KING!

Curly Howard
12-15-2003, 08:35 AM
Originally posted by Magic Man
Hey guys, I've been busy sketching my ass off since finishing uni - I'm applying for an artist job with a local computer game studio (Ratbag Studios - www.ratbaggames.com) and I want to put together a professional looking portfolio so I have a better chance of getting a job there.

They are looking for people with degrees in industrial design, or visual communication - of which I have neither, so I'll probably be up against some pretty stiff competition.

The company specialises in racing games...actually, thats all they make, so I guess I have to submit at least a few pieces of art to do with vehicles. I've NEVER done any car drawings before, I prefer to do character designs and stuff like that, so I've been spending the last few days drawing cars non-stop. I decided I don't really want to go to all the trouble of designing a car from concept, so I used an existing car - in the Dodge Viper, and did a concept style piece just to demonstrate that I have a grasp of Photoshop (I also did the pen and marker sketch).

If you have any critiques, please voice them - I want to produce an A1 portfolio for their consideration, this is my first piece (I'll also throw in a few of my better character designs I guess).

Scanned image (Pen and marker on bleedproofpaper): http://www.users.on.net/bobbyeow/Art/Viper_Scan_Image.jpg

Final image after photoshop: http://www.users.on.net/bobbyeow/Art/Viper_Full_Colour.jpg

Cheers, M.


Ratbag makes some of my favorite game.... Dirt track racing WOO etc...
anyway with your talent and imagination I'm sure you'll end up working somewhere that will put it to good use.

you may want to look at

http://www.umpracing.com/

http://www.dirtmotorsports.com/

since a lot of their games are about dirt racing.

good luck

Magic Man
12-15-2003, 08:46 AM
thanks bro, I'll definitely check it out - you can never know enough about a field you are trying to get into.

ps. the color image has been updated, the wing mirrors have been fixed, the side panels have also been changed.