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BOLLOCKS
10-09-2008, 11:40 PM
Beezy You Fine
You are the Sun
You are the Rain
You are what I can’t have
You and me are together
Only in a Dream
The MVP of my Team
And It Seem
Like the season has come to an End
But I still like to Pretend
I had a chance
To get inside your Pants
Oh Did I say pants?
Beezy you know I meant to say Heart
Apart from that being
A difficult Task
I must Ask
And I’ll do this Fast
Let me grab a handful of that Ass
If you let me I’ll take off my Mask
Then we could make Love at Last
Don’t care about your Past
Together we’ll make a Future
You need Some Loving In your Life
Imaging you were my Wife
That’s my dream team
You’re the Star
In reality I fear you’re too Far
From my Grip
From me to you it’s a light Year
But I Won’t shear a Tear
Even though I Fear
I can’t travel a light Year
Unless you sit Tight
Cuz I’m coming though at the speed of Light
And the future’s looking Bright

By rich loc

Any ideas for a good hook for my song ?:Thinkingo


:D

SkilledB
10-10-2008, 01:47 PM
You Make It Alright Everytime i seee youuu
Even when ya far away, im still with youuuu
so dont belive i dont carreeee
just because im not thereeee
you'll always be apart of me, thats foreverrrr
im always with youuuu


u like?

Iamnotausername
10-10-2008, 02:26 PM
ooooh baby its truuuuuuue
That I Love yoooouuuuu
Cos you're my giiiiiiirl
you make my stomach whiiiiiiirl.
aaaand if you love meeee
then maybe we'll seeeeee
how great our love can BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

BOLLOCKS
10-11-2008, 04:24 AM
Well this is how the song "Beezy Ya Fine" came out. :D

http://www.myspace.com/sicO678

Tha_Greatest
10-11-2008, 05:02 AM
Any ideas for a good hook for my song ?:Thinkingo


:D
babyyyyyyyyy, i love you so,
never ever wanna see you go,
i wrote this rhyme, just for you,
in case your love is true........(ooooooooooooooh)
but then.......

floyd sucked on my ****, (yes)
floyd sucked on my ****,
floyd licked my right ball,
yes he licked it all,

floyd sucked on my ****, (yes)
floyd sucked on my ****,
floyd licked my right ball,
yes he licked it all,


floyd sucked on my ****, (yes)
floyd sucked on my ****,
floyd licked my right ball,
yes he licked it all,

Truth
10-11-2008, 08:32 AM
"But I still like to Pretend
I had a chance
To get inside your Pants
Oh Did I say pants?
Beezy you know I meant to say Heart"-rich loc

lol :haha: good stuff.

KESSLER
10-13-2008, 03:12 PM
Well this is how the song "Beezy Ya Fine" came out. :D

http://www.myspace.com/sicO678

I'm sorry, but that's terrible.

BOLLOCKS
10-15-2008, 08:07 PM
I'm sorry, but that's terrible.

Check out my Youtube Channel. :D
http://www.youtube.com/viciousaztecknight

chillin8
10-15-2008, 10:08 PM
not bad at all

BOLLOCKS
10-16-2008, 12:03 AM
not bad at all

Is that you p4pking ? :D