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Eyes Of The South
06-22-2003, 12:04 AM
Well im sure we have a few poets on the board.My stuff aint verry good but its how I like to vent so ill share some in hopes other members will share theres:)


The Darkness

Alone in the dark receses of my mind I lay.
Staring into the darkness.
I hear.
I see.
Im numb.
I feel nothing but the icy cold hands of death creeping , slowly strangeling , I’ve breathed my last breath.
Now in death everything is so clear.
The pills have done what I could never do,found all the answers.
I no longer feel all the pain that 18 years of bull**** have brought me.
The answers are here and oh so clear to me now.
Why couldend I have seen them all along?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
It took a bottle of pills and a broken will to answer all my strongest questions.
Now I am forever alone to wonder what could have been.
If I would have just forgot.
If I could have just let it go and written it off.
Instead I took the easy road for the first time in my life.
I put my fists down for the first time in my life and gave up in a fight.
I’ve lost the battle and the war.
This war will never be televised or be seen on the front page.
I am now a statistic.
A memory in the back of a news paper.
I lay here alone on the cold slab being drained of my life force.
I am no more.
Nothing but a memory.
A face never again to be seen in the crowd.
Trapped alone inside a box , trapped like I’ve spent the rest of my miserable life.
Alone in the nothingness I am and have become.
The reverend says his prayer.
I hear the cry’s but I know on the inside its laughter.
Never have such a group of people been so happy.
I feel the cold box which holds my remains lowerd.
Into the cold dead ground.
This earth is now part of me.
This is my eternal sleep.
Never ending sleep.
The earth is thrown down upon me.
I feel it consuming me.
There is no going back.
THIS IS MY DESTINY!!
Never ending,never fading,alone in the darkness.
No more love,no more pain,no more hate only regret.
Never to feel again.
I guess its better like this.
Im gone never to be heard from again.
I lose everything and sleep my eternal sleep.
I hear a ringing?
Could it be?
The alarm is off.

**** ANOTHER DAY OF THIS BULL****!!!!!!!!



And anotherone

THE LIFE THAT COULD HAVE BEEN

Thiefing slut.
You stole the one thing that could have made this life complete.
Now I seek my revenge,to turn your world upside down.
I will destroy everything that you hold dear with these words.
You turned this heart black and for that I will allways fiend for your blood.
You stole from me ,that was my ****ing creation and you stole it.
I will tear into that piece of **** you call a heart and rip it to shreads .
I will bring your world crashing down,the blood that courses through these veins will be heated with hatred for you until the day you are no more.
I will rip into your core and spill you all over the floor.
Your insides will be a reminder of the pain.
The child that was my redemption is now gone.
You will feel the pain I felt that infamous night you brought my world crashing down.
I will have my revenge on you,for all eternity my face will be etched into your black heart till the day comes I destroy you.
This heart beats only to see your demise,I ****ing hate you and you will feel my wrath.
I sit and wait,alone by myself,
The voices in my head give me comfort and keep me motivated to carry out my work and see your end.
I lurk in the shadows and in the back of your mind and wait.
I WILL FIND YOU!!!!!
I HUNT!!!!
Your putrid scent fills the air I breath
Ever feinding to see your demise
To see your end
I WILL KILL YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




Well thats some of my work.Its not good but writing helps me get through the bad days. Come on guys post some of your work \m/

Magic Man
06-22-2003, 12:14 AM
Hello Darkness my old friend, I've come to talk with you again...

Eyes Of The South
06-22-2003, 12:15 AM
Well isnt that deserving of a ****ing medal :)

rtbrouwer
06-22-2003, 03:58 AM
The content of your peoms is really good imo, I just think they are too long. i'd rate em 7 out of 10.

and for magic.

.... because a vision screeping, left it's seeds while I was sleeping
and the vision that was planted in my brain, still remains,
within the sound silence....

Eyes Of The South
06-22-2003, 04:02 AM
Thanks ron and yeah I know there long but when you sitt there and write you dont think you just write what is on your mind.I never think when I write I just let the **** floooowwwww

ruffneck119
06-22-2003, 05:08 AM
no matter how dark the tunnel
no matter how think the darkness
you family is here

when you think all is lost
when you think all hope is past
your family is here

pain that swallows the soul
sorrow that kills the mind
your family is here

we are here to pick you up
we are your crutch
we are everything you love

and in return you cannot give in
keep fighting
keep praying

your family is here
you are not lost
just reach and ask

we will be here


-Javi (drunk)

ruffneck119
06-22-2003, 05:24 AM
I used to write my love poems all the time; the one above I made while thinking of my uncle. My "love" is Krystal I posted pics before. I loved that woman so much. No girl will have my love like she did until I know she is going to be the one I marry.

They say it is better to have love and lost.
It is true but at the same time it's not.
What is stronger?
The love you had or the pain you feel after losing it?
My pain has been so great but
At the same time memories are so fond
Love is powerful
Pain is unbearable

Why should love be lost?
Why must I make mistakes to lead to and end of love?
There is never an end to love
Once you love you can never stop
Love is stronger than pain

I see her and look into her eyes
I see only her
Love fills my soul
Love fills my feelings

There is no wrong when I look into her eyes
The only thing is
When you look away...
You see the truth

it is not meant to be
Our love was and is strong but
Mistakes cannot be taken back
Wrongs cannot be forgoten

To forgive is divine
But we...
I am not devine
She is not devine

I am but mortal in GODS eyes
and in my own heart
Forgive we can
But us that are not devine
Do not understand

To forgive is not possible
It is unreal for a mortal to truely forgive
But it is not unreal
It is not unreal!!!

For me to truely have loved...

-ruff (sad and drunk; with no spell checker)

ruffneck119
06-22-2003, 05:43 AM
Ruff get confused?
Ruff smash

Ruff see ***?
Ruff smash

Ruff don't know WTF is going on?
Ruff really smash

Ruff want cookie?
Ruff eat cookie then smash

Ruff smell nice vagina
Ruff ****ing runs up, bends that ***** over, licks her nice ***** lips, makes her groan with pleasure, then sticks his huge man meat in her and makes her moan his name over and over until ejaculation.

Ruff smash!!!!!!!

- ruff (still drunk and smashing ****)

Magic Man
06-22-2003, 06:08 AM
Me, we.

- Muhammad Ali

...HIS POEMS ROCK!

Eyes Of The South
06-22-2003, 06:31 AM
Nice to see magic man ****ing up yet another thread.Congrats magic

*gives magic thread ****erupper medal*

ruffneck119
06-23-2003, 12:59 PM
Thanks Magic Man!!!

Bzob
06-23-2003, 01:04 PM
Ode to my Mad ****

Oh my favorite Joy stick
How i love to play
In Katos little cooter
balls deep your mad **** shall stay

Althogh se says 3 min man.
you know it is not true
last time you went on and on
and the minutes past were 2

dump your load and hit the hay
do a little cuddle too
make sure she gets the wet spot
so you dont sleep in goo

Bluecifer
06-23-2003, 01:06 PM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Bzob wins! I however will contribute some poetry in motion *whips out dick, begins stroking....*

Bzob
06-23-2003, 01:08 PM
YAY

The Ensanity
06-23-2003, 01:26 PM
Originally posted by Bzob
Ode to my Mad ****

Oh my favorite Joy stick
How i love to play
In Katos little cooter
balls deep your mad **** shall stay

Althogh se says 3 min man.
you know it is not true
last time you went on and on
and the minutes past were 2

dump your load and hit the hay
do a little cuddle too
make sure she gets the wet spot
so you dont sleep in goo HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

ruffneck119
06-23-2003, 01:43 PM
Hey I made some good **** while I was drunk. Kind of wierd but it's still good.

Brian Fellows
06-23-2003, 01:49 PM
One cat going to the bathroom on a toilet, maybe...
Many cats taking a **** on a toilet, THATS CRAZY!!!


http://www.greenapple.com/~jorp/amzanim/cat-toilet.jpg

http://www.ebaumsworld.com/goodcat.jpg

http://www.karawynn.net/mishacat/photos/mtoiletback.jpg

Magic Man
06-23-2003, 01:58 PM
Ode to Down.

Down is a poster who likes to postwhore,
his penis is shrivelled like a dirty rotten apple core,
before you ask how I know,
let me tell you he's a major ho,
he goes down on customers with a humungous roar.

The Mouse
06-24-2003, 03:38 PM
As I swim through weaves of sorrow,
My eyes are shut with dreams of tomorrow.

Vivid screams so bleached with pain,
A life once sought I hoped to gain.

My soul is dead with slow decay,
With bloody knees I crawl like a *****.
My passion is dead in a dreamer’s heart,
I close my eyes for a life I might stitch.

In tortured daybreak my eyelids open,
In a carnival of fakeness I take a token.

Breathe into me you ****ing whore,
Fill up my lungs in a screaming roar.

ruffneck119
06-24-2003, 03:45 PM
*turning turning

I was made to kill
Look at my splendor

*turning turning

Only one I coudl not kill
Look at my sarrow

*turning turning

#119 where are you?
Killer Robot will never feel again

*turning turning

Eyes Of The South
06-24-2003, 04:34 PM
Originally posted by Magic Man
Ode to Down.

Down is a poster who likes to postwhore,
his penis is shrivelled like a dirty rotten apple core,
before you ask how I know,
let me tell you he's a major ho,
he goes down on customers with a humungous roar.


magicallyPWN3dlicious!!1

Tanner Rhoden
06-24-2003, 04:56 PM
I am troubled
Immeasurably
By your eyes

I am struck
By the feather
or your soft
Reply

The sound of glass
Speaks quick
Disdain

And conceals
What your eyes fight
To explain

Bzob
06-24-2003, 04:58 PM
Tanner that was good, But i wanted to laugh so write another one ****er

Roses are red
Violets are dead
Sugar is lumpy
So is your head

Eyes Of The South
06-24-2003, 05:32 PM
PWN3d!!1

The Mouse
06-25-2003, 03:41 PM
With a rusty knife it cuts into me
Absorb its vapors and bleed for her
She cuts so deeply with love like a blur
Infectious plague I will never see

Flesh of pure and meat so sweet
Insides exposed it drips like a kiss
Violent dreams I hope to meet

She kisses me softly with lips of a rose
Her insides shutter with her knife of an orgasm
Stabs me again like an echoed spasm
Like an artistic quilt her pleasure sews

The Mouse
06-25-2003, 03:42 PM
Kiss of death, kiss of pain
Like your meth, your soul to drain

Tongue of slut and eyes on my platter
With your eyes shut, your blood I will splatter

Rickety splat ***** cry for me
Rickety splat ***** die for me

Gasp for air your throat is open
In pleasure I’ll stare at your every motion

God to give and me to take
And I will live for death to make

Rickety splat ***** cry for me
Rickety splat ***** die for me

Curly Howard
06-25-2003, 03:46 PM
Well I'll tell you a story of whisky
& mystics & men
And about the believers, & how the
whole thing began


First there were women & children obeying
the moon
Then daylight brought wisdom & fever & sickness
too soon


You can try to remind me
instead of the other
you can


You can help to insure
That we all insecure our command


If you don't give a listen
I won't try to tell your
new hand


This is it can't you see
That we all have our end in
the band


And if all of the teacher & preachers
of wealth were arraigned
We could see quite a future
for me in the literal sands


And if all of the people
could claim to inspect
such regret


Well we'd have no forgiveness
forgetfulness faithful remorse


So I tell you
I tell you
I tell you
We must send away
We must try to find a new
answer instead of
a way

Curly Howard
06-25-2003, 03:46 PM
Well I used to know someone fair
She had orange ribbons in her hair
She was such a trip
She was hardly there
But I loved her just the same.

There was rain in our window,
The FM set was ragged
But she could talk, yeah,
We learned to speak

And one year
has gone by

Such a long long road to seek it
All we did was break and freak it
We had all
That lovers ever had
We just blew it
And I'm not sad

Well I'm mad

And I'm bad

And two years
have gone by

Now her world was bright orange
And the fire glowed
And her friend had a baby
And she lived with us
Yeah, we broke through the window
Yeah, we knocked on the door
Her phone would not answer,
Yeah, but she's still home

Now her father has passed over
& her sister is a star
& her mother smokes diamonds
& she sleeps out in the car

Yeah, but she remembers Chicago
& grass by the lake
& people who laugh'd
& made her poor heart ache

Now we live down in the valley
We work out on the farm
We climb up to the mountains
& everything's fine

& I'm still here
& you're still there
& we're still around

Eyes Of The South
06-25-2003, 06:32 PM
Now were kicking guys. Keep em comming \m/

ruffneck119
06-25-2003, 07:03 PM
I Nice
I eat Ice Cream
I know Internet
I play pee pee
I will kick you in your cunt *****!!!